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DaliaH by khaoskai DaliaH by khaoskai
Daliah-san is my newest original character.
When I thought of him, I wanted to create someone with a really bad personality! Haha
And well… Daliah is surely not a good guy.
He is selfish, arrogant and loves money.
Actually, he doesn’t really care about other people…

But maybe, something will make him change his mind some day?..
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There´s something a little wrong with his pants, the shape isn´t quite right. The area of his crotch looks like a ball, and it sure is weird. I guess it´s a lack of the shadows concerning sharp wrinkles of the cloth. The kind of shadows you did to his shirt are the ones missing. Or maybe the "baggy spot" is a little too long, that might be the case too.
Also the way his glasses are done annoys me a little too. I mean, they couldn´t be totally covered with hair. The hair on the glasses looks like an "iron curtain". It also makes the hair look a little bad.
Otherwise very good work, you did a great job picturing his personality and the usage of colors is as flawless as always.
I really enjoy your works!
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From where I stand, I'm hoping I don't get angry readers, Overall the concept is pretty cool. But this one have a couple of flaws that I don't normally see in your work, mostly anatomical. I do understand that this was done in watercolors, a technique hard to dominate so the watercolors are 100% good.

Now, I get the fashion concept but for the width of his torso is is kind of big compared to how the think the legs seem to feel when the jeans start to close at his calf and ankles.

I bet you wanted the snickers to look big, otherwise his feet are to big. Lastly the head, I generally love your necks and this one seems misplaced which makes the head look misplaced, his cranium seem to be leaning apart from the head but that could be because of the hair style, I don't know if he wears expansores in his ears but the ear that shows seems misplaced too.

I hope you will look what you find in this critique since its the first time I get to see a new work of yours requiring one. I will not rate impact since everyone has his opinion in the concept, and this one is not my gig.

Thanks for taking the time to read this
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:icontayskiyowl:
Очень крутая акварель!!!
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Tapunyr Sep 25, 2013  Professional Writer
Love it.  :D (Big Grin) 
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DavyWagnarok Aug 19, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
What a badass.
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DeliciousTacos Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's awesome
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:icontsitra00:
Whose Able?  Anyway, that stop sign is by far the best stop sign in the picture.  Also, I think it would look good shoved down the neck of a decapitated corpse.  Wonderful drawing; phantasmal grass.
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ThickBlackBlood Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I would believe it's: "Fuckable." 
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:icontsitra00:
Oh.  Makes more sense?
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verycuriouslystrange Jul 22, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
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0neLuv-aesop420 Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I like I like, but it reminds me of those wanna be'z at my school who dress like this smh lol
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